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It was a beautiful summer evening and
seventeen year old Elizabeth
strolled along the shore of the Atlantic.
The gentle breeze blew her long blond hair into her face as she stopped to gaze
at the sunset. Her thoughts went back to the night of April 15th, 1912; the night that
changed her life. Though the sinking of the Titanic had taken place eleven
years earlier, Elizabeth
remembered every detail as clearly as if it were yesterday...
The day of April 10th, 1912, was coming to a close. The soft glow
of the moon illuminated the faces of a brother and sister who were standing
side by side on the deck of the RMS Titanic as it sailed from port.
“How much longer until we get to...what's
it called?” six year old Elizabeth
looked up at her older brother with a puzzled expression.
A broad smile spread across Daniel's face
as he looked down at his little sister, “New York.
It will take us about seven days to get there if we don't experience any
problems.”
“And then we get to see Mama again! I
miss her a lot.” said Elizabeth as
she looked over the calm water towards the shores of Cherbourg,
France, the only place
they had ever called home. Their mother had left for America
seven months earlier to care for their elderly aunt, and Daniel, who was
eighteen years old, promised that they would join her in New
York once they had enough money.
The first four days aboard the Titanic
were quite uneventful. Elizabeth
met a couple of other young girls close to her age, and passed many long hours
playing with them. Even though she enjoyed being with her new friends, her
favorite thing to do was to sit with Daniel as he told her stories. She loved
it when he would read to her from the Bible, just like her father used to do.
“Can you please read me
just one more story?” begged Elizabeth.
It was now the fifth night of the voyage, and Daniel was tucking her into a
comfortable bed in their third-class cabin.
He grinned and let out a small chuckle,
“Alright, one more. Which one will it be?”
“Jesus calming the storm! That's one of
my favorites.” she said with excitement, and then snuggled down in the blankets
to listen.
After he had finished, he asked, “Did you
know that God still calms storms today?”
Elizabeth
gave him a questioning look and he continued, “You were quite young when Father
died, but I remember how God gave Mother and me an unexplainable peace. He
comforted us in the middle of our storm and gave us the strength to move on. No
matter what storms we may have to face in this life, we can be sure that God is
right there with us and will walk with us every step of the way.”
Elizabeth
nodded sleepily, not fully understanding everything Daniel had just told her.
She gave him a hug, and after thanking the Lord for all of His blessings, laid
her head on the pillow and fell asleep.
It was about 11:40 when Daniel awoke to a slight jolt of the great
ship. Wondering what had happened, he silently slipped out the door so as not
to wake Elizabeth, and made his way
to the upper deck. After questioning a few of the people who had begun to
gather there, he learned that they had struck an iceberg but no one was sure
how much damage had been done. The captain decided that the lifeboats would be
sent out, though most passengers didn't realize the gravity of the situation.
Daniel made his way back to their cabin
where he dressed Elizabeth warmly
and then carried her to the boat deck. Some of those who had gathered began to
think that perhaps the Titanic would never finish her voyage, while others
believed there to be no danger. As the lifeboats started to be filled, Daniel
silently helped Elizabeth into her
life jacket and then picked her up in his strong arms. Elizabeth
squeezed his neck hard, not wanting to ever let go. He carried her to the
nearest life boat and carefully loosened her grasp.
Looking down into Elizabeth's
blue eyes, Daniel took a deep breath and gently said, “Elizabeth,
I need you to be very brave. Mama will be waiting for you in New
York. Tell her...” his voice caught as he tried to
choke back tears, “tell her that I love her.”
“Please,” Elizabeth
sobbed, confused by why she had to go alone, “please don't leave me. I want you
to come with me. Why can't you come too?”
“Father taught me that women and children
are first. As much as I want to be with you, I need to stay here and make sure
that everyone else gets a place on a lifeboat. Please don't cry for me.
Remember that God is with us, even in the middle of a storm.” With these last
words he drew Elizabeth into a big
hug, tears silently rolling down their faces.
As the lifeboat was slowly lowered over
the ship's side, Elizabeth kept her
gaze fixed on her brother. “Be brave,” he called as the lifeboat drew closer to
the cold, icy water, “I love you.”
His voice faded away as the cries of
women and the rushing of water drowned out all other sounds. Elizabeth
looked back at the great ship, straining her eyes to catch one last glimpse of
her brother. Yes, there he was, handing women and children into the lifeboats.
An arm gently slipped around her shoulder, and a young lady of about
twenty-five quietly said, “Your brother is a fine man. Not all of the men
willingly stepped aside and let others go first.”
Elizabeth
started to cry and laid her head on the lady's shoulder, eventually falling
into a fitful sleep. Several hours later they were picked up by the Carpathia,
a ship sent to rescue those who survived. As Elizabeth
stood on the deck, staring back towards the water which the Titanic had sank
beneath, she wondered if her life would ever be the same again. As she stood
there, a peace that is hard for a six year old to understand came over her.
Maybe this was what Daniel meant when he had told her that God would be with
her, even through the storm.
She never forgot Daniel's bravery. As she
grew into a beautiful young woman, she realized that it was on that tragic
night that her brother truly became a man. He was determined that the women and
children should be saved first, and in her eyes he was a hero.
Elizabeth continued her walk along the
beach, remembering that cold night when her world was turned upside down. She
turned her tear filled eyes towards the sky and a smile spread across her face.
Yes, she would see her brother again some day. And until then, she would
remember the night that God calmed the storm and gave her a peace that
surpassed all understanding.
Oh,Rebekah! You're story is beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
ReplyDeleteI also entered the VF story contest this year. I'm thinking of posting the story on my blog sometimes, too :-)
I LOVED this. They should make a movie based on it. =)
ReplyDeleteWow! Nice story, I really liked it!
ReplyDeleteJessica
Wonderful story...I really enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing with us all :)
ReplyDeleteBlessings!
Bethany
Aw, I totally love it! You're an amazing writer...I agree with Blythe, a movie would be sweet! ;)
ReplyDeleteWow... that is an amazing story. So touching. You definitely have a gift for writing. Thank you for sharing that with us... :)
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
-Mikailah
P.S. I am REALLY surprised you didn't win anything!! :) Your story is amazing.
How lovely Rebekah! It was very touching and I could picture it in my head. I love how you brought it to a nice conclusion in the end. Too bad you didn't win...it would've been a great story to feature.
ReplyDeleteGood Job Becka....I really liked how you put God's word into it and everything:) Love you!!
ReplyDeleteThat was SO GOOD!!! I almost cried! You did a very good job!!
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